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With every moment passing by
My love for you grows unto the sky
And even though I don't know why
I can't even justify
My feelings for you
Even though I knew
I couldn't have you from the start
You're taking with you my broken heart
A heart of ice
And as I watch you take my heart
I realize I've played my part
And as my love for you grows I find
I cannot get you off my mind
That more and more you carry with you
My now beating heart
And that in my tomb we left behind
My feelings for her
Frozen in time…
My love for you grows unto the sky
And even though I don't know why
I can't even justify
My feelings for you
Even though I knew
I couldn't have you from the start
You're taking with you my broken heart
A heart of ice
And as I watch you take my heart
I realize I've played my part
And as my love for you grows I find
I cannot get you off my mind
That more and more you carry with you
My now beating heart
And that in my tomb we left behind
My feelings for her
Frozen in time…
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According to my archives this was written by a certain someone (me) over Christmas break in 2007. I remember I wrote most of it in my aunt and uncle's basement. This one was... Inspired. If I were to have written this today (impossible) I would have chosen a different second to last line, "My lifeless soul" comes to mind. However, I can't possibly bring myself to change it. Sentimental attachment besides.
Kind of a preface to The Cold [link].
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So beautiful! I understand it all to well. I think you hit the emotions perfectly.