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Second Rate Suicide

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I hear something
In my head
And sure enough
It wants me dead
I inquired its name
To which said
'I am your Conscience,
Now follow me to the shed'
So I did
I went where I was led
It told me to hang by wire
But I shot myself instead
Falling back, bleeding out
Hitting concrete, my final bed
Cold but not, aware these are my final thoughts:
So much... Red
So much...



Dead.
Written 8/12/2010

I wrote this last night as I tried to go to sleep... I know it's strange. Probably isn't any good either, but I felt I should put it up...

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Mark-e-uh-vell-e's avatar
This is wonderful i like- nay i love the flow